Exercise 11

1. The text below is an original paragraph from a book titled “The Americans: The Democratic Experience,” published in 1973 by Daniel J. Boorstin,  page 390.

Still, the telephone was only a convenience, permitting Americans to do more casually and with less effort what they had already been doing before.

Below are some examples, some good and some not-so-good, of how you might incorporate this information into a paper.  What do you think—are these examples plagiarism, or not?

 

If you wrote:

Would it be plagiarism?

The telephone was a convenience, enabling Americans to do more casually and with less effort what they had already been doing before.

 

 

Daniel J. Boorstin argues that the telephone was only a convenience, permitting Americans to do more casually and with less effort what they had already been doing before.

 

 

Daniel J. Boorstin has noted that most Americans considered the telephone as simply "a convenience," an instrument that allowed them "to do more casually and with less effort what they had already been doing before" (1973, p.390).

 

 

The introduction of the phone in this country simplified the lives of many people who viewed it as a way to do easier and in less formal manner what  they already used to.

 

According to Daniel J. Boorstin (1973), the telephone simplified the lives of many people who viewed it as a way to do easier and in less formal manner what  they already used to.

 

Still, the telephone was only a convenience, permitting Americans to do more casually and with less effort what they had already been doing before” (Boorstin, 1973, p.390).

 

 

 

2. The following  paragraph comes from David V. Sheehan’s book, Anxiety disease, p. 69, published in 1983 in New York by Scribner’s Publishing:

When the condition was named, “agoraphobia” was chosen from the cluster of phobias as being one of the most representative or typical of all the many fears the patient has at this point.  Curiously, the literal symptom of agoraphobia, fear of the marketplace or fear of crowded places, is not the most common or even central fear shared by patients with anxiety disease.

Add what is missing in the two examples below:

Example 1

 According to Sheehan, the term “agoraphobia” was selected from the cluster of phobias as being one of the most representative or typical of all the many fears the patient has at this point.

Example 2

Sheehan claims that fear of crowds is not one of the main characteristics of people who suffer from symptoms of agoraphobia.

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