Writing 20 - Cora Agatucci
Basic Writing I


WRITING 20 COURSE COMPETENCIES
& BENCHMARKS 
Prof. Cora Agatucci, WR 20 CRN # 40737, Fall 2000
Shortcuts:  Instructor's Benchmark Tracking Sheets
Student Self-Assessment Survey

As revised and approved by the Humanities Department Composition Committee, 10 May 1999, nine course Competencies (or student learning Outcomes) have been defined for Writing 20 - Basic Writing I; and the following Benchmarks have been established for Writing 20 courses:

  1. Benchmarked Competencies are those numbered 1-7 below  [i.e. those competencies prioritized as essential in measuring the educational effectiveness of a WR 20 course]. 
    [I have grouped Competencies #1-3  under Paragraph Writing Skills, & Competencies #4-7 under Sentence Editing & Correction Skills]
  2. Benchmarks are program-wide, as well as specific to each section of Writing 20.
  3. [One means of assessing the educational effectiveness of a Writing  20 course in enabling its students to achieve the targeted course Competencies, is to meet the following standards on designated assignments:]
    70% of students will perform at minimum competency
    with a score of 75% (C) or better;
    30% of students will perform at advanced skill level
    with a score of 85% (B) or better;
    10% percent of students will perform at mastery skill level
    with a score of 95% (A) or better.
  4. The measure for an outcome may be a single assignment or more than one assignment in each class.
Benchmark Tracking Sheets:  I have adapted the approved WR 121 Benchmark Tracking Sheet to WR 20, reproduced below.  Tracking Sheets identify the assignments to be used to measure whether benchmarks for Competencies #1-7 have been achieved.  I have also quoted excerpts from my WR 20 Syllabus describing course learning activities and assignments designed to address WR 20 competencies.

WRITING 20 COMPETENCIES #1-7 
& BENCHMARK ASSIGNMENTS

[Competencies #1-3: Paragraph Writing Skills]

Competency 1: Be able to produce stand-alone paragraphs with a topic sentence and supporting details.

Competency 2: Be able to maintain focus and coherence for stand-alone paragraphs of at least 200 words.

Competency 3: Be able to distinguish between general support and specific evidence and to apply the distinction to one’s writing.

[From Cora Agatucci's WR 20 Syllabus for Fall 2000:] "Writing 20 will introduce effective paragraph and essay writing skills, emphasizing the principles of focus, organization, and development. Textbook assignments offer introductions, examples, techniques, and topic ideas to guide students in developing their own writing. Students will apply what they learn through frequent skill-building exercises and graded writing assignments.  Students will also learn to adapt and expand their paragraph skills to in-class timed writing and to composing short essays.  To help students become self-reflective writers and independent learners, a series of short informal Writer’s Profiles (WP) will accompany major graded writing assignments. Writers Profile assignments will prompt students to recognize their writing strengths and sentence style, to identify their writing weaknesses, and to develop plans for improving their writing skills.  At the end of the quarter, students will prepare a portfolio representing their best work, selected and revised from previous graded writing assignments; with a cover letter explaining their choices, reflecting on their learning experiences, and assessing their performance in meeting Writing 20 course competencies over the term."

BENCHMARKS: COMPETENCIES #1-3

Student performance on the following assignments will be instructor-assessed:

Paragraph #2 and In-Class Paragraph #3 [at midterm]
Portfolio: a.  Cover Letter-Essay (new) and b. two best (revised) writings
 [at end of term]

Student Self-Assessment ratings of Competencies #1-3
have also been compiled from Final Writer's Profile [ end of term]

[Competencies #4-7: Sentence Editing & Correction Skills]

Competency 4: Be able to produce paragraphs containing a variety of sentence lengths and structures, including some complex sentences.

Competency 5: Be able to edit one’s own writing to avoid most major sentence errors.

Competency 6: Be able to edit one’s own writing to avoid capitalization, spelling and confused word errors.

Competency 7: Be able to edit one’s own writing for generally accurate use of commas, semi-colons, apostrophes, and pronouns.

[From Cora Agatucci's WR 20 Syllabus for Fall 2000:] "Textbook assignments will review the fundamentals of sentence structure and style. Exercises, directed class discussion, and quizzes will build students' skills in identifying and correcting common errors in grammar, usage, punctuation, and mechanics. However, emphasis will placed on students' ability to apply what they have learned in their own writing, by editing to improve their sentence style and by correcting sentence errors. Writers Workshops with other students, the instructor's editing comments on student writing assignments, and Writer's Profiles will help Writing 20 students develop these competencies."

BENCHMARKS: COMPETENCIES #4-7

Student performance on the following assignments will be instructor-assessed:

Paragraph #2 (all) and In-Class Paragraph #3 [at midterm]
Portfolio: a.  Cover Letter-Essay (new) and b. two best (revised) writings
  [at end of term]

Student Self-Assessment ratings of Competencies 4-7
have also been compiled from Final Writer's Profile [ end of term]

BENCHMARK TRACKING SHEETS:
Adapted to WRITING 20

This tracking sheet is an adaptation of the one approved for WR 121 by the Composition Committee, to be implemented in Fall 2000.  I intend to pilot-test this tracking formula in my WR 20 in Fall 2000, as part of the Humanities Dept's preparation for accreditation.  I have designed my Fall 2000 WR 20 Syllabus course description to address identified WR 20 competencies, and have tentatively identified some mid-term and end-of-term assignments to measure specific benchmarks.

Instructor: Cora Agatucci   CRN: 40737   Term: Fall   Year: 2000

[Paragraph Writing Skills]

WR 20 Competency Assignments Date Total Students %A %B %C %NE*
D,F,0
Benchmark
Met? (Y/N)
1: Be able to produce stand-alone paragraphs with a topic sentence and supporting details.

a Paragraph #2

10/16/00

18

39%
7/18

 39%
7/18

 5%
1/18

17%
3/18

Y: 83% at
Min. &  Above
15/18

b In-Class
Paragraph #3
10/27/00

17*
took 
in-class 
Paragraph#3

  6%
1/17

 47%
8/17

23.5%
4/17

23.5%
4/17

76.5% at
Min. &  Above
13/17

c Portfolio:
(new) Cover
Letter / Essay
(Final)
12/7/00

18

 22%
4/18

 22 %
4/18

 33%
6/18

22%
4/18

78% at
Min. &  Above
14/18

d Portfolio: 
two best (revised) writing selections 

28%
5/18

44%
8/18

6%
1/18

22%
4/18

Y: 78% at
Min. &  Above
14/18

2: Be able to maintain focus & coherence for stand-alone paragraphs of at least 200 words. a Paragraph #2 10/16/00

18

 39%
7/18
 39%
7/18
 5%
1/18

17%
3/18

Y: 83% at
Min. &  Above
15/18

b Portfolio:
(new) Cover
Letter / Essay
(Final)
12/7/00

18

22 %
4/18

22 %
4/18

33%
6/18

22 %
4/18

78% at
Min. &  Above
14/18

c Portfolio: 
two best (revised) writing selections 

28%
5/18

44%
8/18

6%
1/18

22%
4/18

Y: 78% at
Min. &  Above
14/18

3: Be able to distinguish between general support and specific evidence &  to apply this distinction to one’s writing. a Paragraph #2 10/16/00

18

78% at 
Min. or Above

14/18

22%
4/18

78% at 
Min. or Above

14/18

b In-Class
Paragraph #3
10/27/00

17*
took 
in-class 
Paragraph#3

6%
1/ 17

 47%
8/17

23.5%
4/17

23.5%
4/17

76.5% at
Min. &  Above
13/17

c Portfolio:
(new) Cover
Letter / Essay
(Final)
12/7/00

18

22 %
4/18
22 %
4/18
33 %
6/18
22 %
4/18

78% at
Min. &  Above
14/18

d Portfolio: 
two best (revised) writing selections 
28%
5/18
44%
8/18
6%
1/18
22%
4/18

Y: 78% at
Min. &  Above
14/18

% *NE = % Not Evaluated (Incomplete or Late)

Student Self-Assessment ratings of Competencies #1-3
have been compiled from Final Writer's Profile [ end of term]

[Sentence Editing & Correction Skills]

WR 20 Competency Assignments Date Total Students %A %B %C %NE/
D,F,0
Benchmark
Met? (Y/N)

4: Be able to produce paragraphs containing a variety of sentence lengths and structures, including some complex sentences.

a Paragraph #2

10/16/00

18

72% at Min.
or Above

13/18

28%
5/18

72% at
Min. or Above
13/18

b Portfolio:
(new) Cover
Letter / Essay
(Final)
12/7/00

18

22 %
4/18

22 %
4/18

 33 %
6/18

22 %
4/18

Y: 78% at
Min. &  Above
14/18

5: Be able to edit one’s own writing to avoid most major sentence errors [esp. 
fragments,
comma splices,
& run-on
sentences]
a Paragraph #2 10/16/00

18

 28%
5/18

16%
3/18

28%
5/18

28%
5/18

Y: 72% at
Min. or Above
13/18

b In-Class
Paragraph #3
10/27/00

17*
took 
in-class 
Paragraph#3

 6%
1/ 17

47%
8/17

23.5%
4/17

23.5%
4/17

76.5% at
Min. or Above
13/17

c Portfolio:
(new) Cover
Letter / Essay
(Final)
12/7/00

18

22 %
4/18

22 %
4/18

33 %
6/18

22 %
4/18

Y: 78% at
Min. &  Above
14/18

d Portfolio: 
two best (revised) writing selections
(Final)
12/7/00

18

28%
5/18

44%
8/18

6%
1/18

22%
4/18

Y: 78% at
Min. &  Above
14/18

6: Be able to edit one’s own writing to avoid capitalization, spelling and confused word errors. a Paragraph #2 10/16/00

18

39% at Min.
or Above

7/18

61%
11/18

N:39% at
Min. or  Above
7/18

b Portfolio:
(new) Cover
Letter / Essay
(Final)
12/7/00

18

22 %
4/18

22 %
4/18

33 %
6/18

22 %
4/18

Y: 78% at
Min. &  Above
14/18

7: Be able to edit one’s own writing for generally accurate use of commas, semi-colons, apostrophes, & pronouns. a Paragraph #2 10/16/00

18

 28%
5/18
 16%
3/18
28%
5/18
28%
5/18

Y:72% at
Min. or  Above
13/18

b Portfolio:
(new)
Cover
Letter / Essay
(Final)
12/7/00

18

22 %
4/18
22 %
4/18
33 %
6/18
22 %
4/18

Y: 78% at
Min. &  Above
14/18

c Portfolio: 
two best (revised) writing selections 
28%
5/18
44%
8/18
6%
1/18
22%
4/18

Y: 78% at
Min. &  Above
14/18

% *NE = % Not Evaluated (Incomplete or Late)

Student Self-Assessment ratings of Competencies #4-7
have been compiled from Final Writer's Profile [end of term]

As additional skills are covered sequentially over the term, they were added to evaluation criteria.  Normally I weigh student performance in all these evaluation criteria to determine the overall assignment grade.  Thus, the overall letter grades for the targeted assignments are not necessarily good indicators of student performance in specific competencies. When possible (and in future), in order to track student achievement of specific competencies, I have or plan to (a) revise my evaluation criteria categories to isolate specific competencies, and (b) give sub-ratings (with letter grade equivalencies) in specific competency categories on the graded assignments targeted to track benchmarks.
NOTE: FOCUS IS ON BEING ABLE TO perform competencies IN student WRITING (I.E. I DON'T USE QUIZZES AS BENCHMARK assignments)

WRITING 20 COMPETENCIES #8-9
Not Targeted to be Benchmarked

While Competencies #8 & #9 have not been targeted to be Benchmarked in 2000-2001, they will be addressed and informally assessed in my WR 20 course during Fall 2000, as described below.

[The Writing Process:]

Competency 8: Understand the principles of the writing process in its basic form: generating ideas, organizing ideas, drafting, revising and editing.

[From Cora Agatucci's WR 20 Syllabus for Fall 2000:] "Textbook and course instruction will emphasize the value of an effective writing  process to producing a successful finished composition. Each major writing assignments will be approached as a step-by-step process, from generating and organizing ideas, to drafting, revising, editing, and proofreading. Process-oriented assignments and activities will include "pre-writing" preparation, preliminary drafts and Writers Workshops with other students, revision and editing, instructor feedback, Writers Profiles, and the Portfolio."

WR 20 Competency Assignments Date Total Students %A %B %C %D,F,
NE*
Benchmark
Met? (Y/N)

 8: Understand the principles of the writing process in its basic form: generating ideas, organizing ideas, drafting, revising & editing

a Paragraph #2
Drafts, Workshop,
& Writer's Profile

10/16/00

18

78% at Min.
or Above

14/18

22%
4/18

78% at Min.
or Above

14/18

*NE = % Not Evaluated (Incomplete or Late)

[Writer's Workshops:]

Competency 9: Be able to assist other writers with accurate analysis of focus, coherence, and specific development, at the paragraph level.

[From Cora Agatucci's WR 20 Syllabus for Fall 2000:] "Students will work cooperatively with other students to achieve common course goals for developing effective writing skills in Writing 20.  Writers Workshops, especially, will enable students to learn--with and from other students--how to communicate successfully with readers.  Such small group activities will build upon individual learning experiences from instructor's feedback and Writer's Profiles on successive writing assignments, to develop students' competency in offering specific suggestions to help others strengthen their writing. Exposure to other students' writing will also enlarge everyone's appreciation of the possibilities, as well as the challenges, of achieving one's writing purposes successfully with an audience."

Student Self-Assessment ratings of Competencies #8 & 9
have been compiled from Final Writer's Profile [end of term]

Student Self-Assessment Survey: Final Writer’s Profile
Instructor: Cora Agatucci   CRN: 40737    Term: Fall   Year: 2000
Number of Students Enrolled:  18

Directions:  Self-Assess your writing skills at the end of WR 20 by completing this survey.

·         Self-Rating:  Circle the number on the five-point rating scale that best reflects your self-assessment in each of the nine (9) Competencies described below.

·         Circle the numbered Competencies in which you believe you have improved the most this term.

---------------Number of Students Responding to Competencies #1-5: 13-------------

I. Paragraph Writing Skills

Competency 1:  Circled as Most Improved: 2
Be able to produce stand-alone paragraphs with a topic sentence
and supporting details.

 

5

4

3

2

1

Excellent

Very Good

Satisfactory

Barely Passing

Poor

Self-Rating

2

8

3

0

0

Percentage

15%

62%

23%

0%

0%

  Competency 2:  Circled as Most Improved: 2
Be able to maintain focus and coherence for stand-alone paragraphs of at least 200 words.

 

5

4

3

2

1

Excellent

Very Good

Satisfactory

Barely Passing

Poor

Self-Rating

2

7

4

0

0

Percentage

15%

54%

31%

0%

0%

  Competency 3:  Circled as Most Improved: 1
Be able to distinguish between general support and specific evidence and to apply the distinction to one’s writing.

 

5

4

3

2

1

Excellent

Very Good

Satisfactory

Barely Passing

Poor

Self-Rating

0

7

6

0

0

Percentage

0%

54%

46%

0%

0%

II.  Sentence Editing & Correction Skills

Competency 4:  Circled as Most Improved: 3
Be able to produce paragraphs containing a variety of sentence lengths and structures, including some complex sentences.

 

5

4

3

2

1

Excellent

Very Good

Satisfactory

Barely Passing

Poor

Self-Rating

1

4

7

1

0

Percentage

8%

31%

54%

8%

0%

  Competency 5: Circled as Most Improved: 1
Be able to edit one’s own writing to avoid most major sentence errors [e.g. fragments, comma splices, run-on sentences].

 

5

4

3

2

1

Excellent

Very Good

Satisfactory

Barely Passing

Poor

Self-Rating

0

1

10

2

0

Percentage

0%

8%

77%

15%

0%

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Number of Students Responding to Competencies #6-9: 11

Competency 6:  Circled as Most Improved: 2
Be able to edit one’s own writing to avoid capitalization, spelling and confused word errors.

 

5

4

3

2

1

Excellent

Very Good

Satisfactory

Barely Passing

Poor

Self-Rating

2

6

3

0

0

Percentage

18%

55%

27%

0%

0%

  Competency 7: Be able to edit one’s own writing for generally accurate use of commas, semi-colons, apostrophes, and pronouns.

 

5

4

3

2

1

Excellent

Very Good

Satisfactory

Barely Passing

Poor

Self-Rating

0

5

5

1

0

Percentage

0%

45%

45%

9%

0%

III. The Writing Process

Competency 8: Circled as Most Improved: 2
Understand the principles of the writing process in its basic form: generating ideas, organizing ideas, drafting, revising and editing.

 

5

4

3

2

1

Excellent

Very Good

Satisfactory

Barely Passing

Poor

Self-Rating

5

4

2

0

0

Percentage

45%

36%

18%

0%

0%

  IV.  Writer's Workshops

Competency 9: Be able to assist other writers with accurate analysis of focus, coherence, and specific development, at the paragraph level.

 

5

4

3

2

1

Excellent

Very Good

Satisfactory

Barely Passing

Poor

Self-Rating

2

2

6

0

1

Percentage

18%

18%

55%

0%

9%

URL of this webpage: http://www.cocc.edu/cagatucci/classes/wr20/competencies.htm

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